Lara let out a gasp as she reached up for the next finger hold. She could feel the sun on her shoulders; only halfway up the climb and her skin was slick with sweat.
She could taste the saltiness of her own sweat as it dripped down onto her lips, making the dust that escaped from the rock stick to her face like a mask. Another grunt escaped from Lara’s mouth as she strained her muscles once again, preparing for another lunge towards the top, and victory.
Despite the pain, Lara loved climbing, but she had never climbed anything as steep as this before…This was the hardest mountain lara has ever climbed before. As Lara gasps for air, here we go as she takes a big lunge. Lara is nearly there. She is over half way. keep going she said to herself in her head i can do this.
Hi Tyler O
ReplyDeleteI'm Ong from Panmure Bridge School and I really enjoyed reading your story about the struggle lara is going through. Next time could you add a Learning Intention and a what you enjoyed about the activity? I have not done something like this but I'm loking forward to doing something like this. Thank you.
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ReplyDeletehey tyler wow you put alot of detail into this maybe next time you could double check it to see if you made any mistakes
ReplyDeleteHi Tyler O
ReplyDeleteI'm a stuedent from Panmure Bridge School. I enjoyed reading your story about the rock climbing, because it paints a clear image in your mind adn uses descriptive language. Maybe next time when you do somthng similar to this you could add a Learning Intention so that others know what you are learning about but other than that I think your story was a really descriptive eand made me want to keep reading.
- Juel