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Thursday, July 8, 2021

Jeffery the archer

 Jeffery Is a character from hitting the target.

An old  man with a huge overbite and his teeth are black. And he has long black shiny  hair  one tooth bigger than the other. He wears baggy clothes. And likes to eat worms and grubs he walks with a bad limp.And he does not follow the rules for archery. And he likes to shoot the arrow then paint the target around the arrow.Jeffrey likes gaming and cooking and rugby but he does not play. And Jeffery loves hockey.Jeffery likes to go sailing but one day he went sailing at night and he got caught in a storm and then he cried no no no mum please help me and then the storm stopped he was fine just scared. 


1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Tyler I am Brayden From Yaldhurst Model School I really like this post because you told us a really good story and I like how you said what he likes does and looks like and also I really like that Jeffery likes rugby and gaming because I like them to Next time I think you could of added a bit more info at the end and also what are the words in blue for?
    -Brayden YMS

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